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Slipping past a metal fence, And into the future – The pain of being loved, Like true love: the synapse-shaking, Lip-burning type that compacts your Lungs into playthings at three ...

With clipped wings and tear stained eyes, thin arms reach to your prostitute morning. It stings with every word you scream and in every dream you're falling... I'm going to ...

I can make a margarita in under 30 seconds. Beat that. --Rosalina What's your favorite drink?

It's narrative.

This is..cute. Your lines varied in length - got to short in one part. I think you should fix that rhythm. Maybe not. Four to varsity lettered paparazzi. She was ...

Oy vey. Another lost cause. Does this make sense to anybody?

Scientific statistics have so far proved that out of all professions, writers are the most likely to develop mental unstabilities. You never forgot how to write, did you? When nights ...

I hate how LamaLama is right with the entire white/christain thing that goes on in presidents. Usually Protestants, too. I mean, I don't see a lot of it here up ...

Don’t you remember? together among miles of emerald grass, the popsicle juice spilling down your chin, our endless games of hide and seek, running through the yard, always treasuring the ...

The fourth stanza was a bit awkward with the 2nd line = 1st line repitition....But otherwise, I thought it was a well-worked, patterned and beautiful piece of work. You got ...

It's not your best, yoha_ahoy. It was a just image that you were trying to convey, but the first two stanzas sounded so forced. And the middle stanza was a ...

Way to feel like a two year old again. :D

I, personally, don't favor either. I'm liberal, but both of them give me shivers. Sorry to scar any Bush-supporters, but I'll be glad to see him gone. The future, though, ...

Don't sacrifice the rhythm. It's there, but you broke it many times. I'll point out these lines: Innocent flirting, causing no harm, Until it leads to something deep Where I ...

I'll breathe before I run again. Not the best opening lines. Lure me in before I wake up and this moment's just a passing dream. How about: ..before I wake ...